Hey Elizabeth, Great presentation on how to make.... Ice-Cream... But what you need to work on is adding a bit more information and a bit more detail cause I quite didn't get what you meant when you put the towles on each other and then five cups and all of that. You could of just added a bit more detail. Other than that your presentation was awesome. Keep up the great work:) By Mary Room 17:)
Hey Elizabeth,
ReplyDeleteGreat presentation on how to make.... Ice-Cream... But what you need to work on is adding a bit more information and a bit more detail cause I quite didn't get what you meant when you put the towles on each other and then five cups and all of that. You could of just added a bit more detail. Other than that your presentation was awesome.
Keep up the great work:)
By Mary Room 17:)