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Monday, 20 October 2014

How to stay safe in the sun?


Do you want to have skin cancer? If not then here are some things that can keep you safe in the sun. First a sun hat, sun screen, sun glasses and the right clothing.


Why do we have to wear hats? It is very important to wear a hat on a sunny day because you might get burnt. The right hat to wear on a sunny day  is a covered hat that can protect  your neck, face, nose, head and ears.



It is also important that you wear sunglasses too. It is important to wear sunglasses so it can protect your eyes from the sun so you don’t get blind.
The third way to keep safe in the sun is to wear sunscreen especially when it is a hot day. When it is between twelve to three it is very important that you have a hat, sunglasses and sunscreen if you don’t have a hat,sunglasses and sunscreen then it is better to stay under the shade.


It is very important that you have all these thing when it is a very hot day if you don’t you can get skin cancer or get burnt.

Friday, 17 October 2014

Goat Island

It was a sunny hot day and I was packing my stuff.Me and my family were going to a beach called goat Island.Goat Island was out of Auckland.Me and my sister were packing the food.


When we finally me my sister and my brother got our stuff out of the car. It looked so cool in the middle of the sea there was a Island.Me my sisters my brother and my cousins got change and we got our goggles and went but the water was so cold.

We got to the Island and we started to look around and the ground was hot.Then when we went on the other side of the Island we went inside the water and when we looked inside the water there were stingrays there were lots and me and my sister went close to one and keeped on making noise in the water because I was scared.

When we went back we were hungry so we ate.After we ate me and my cousin Apii were playing in the sand me and her made a really big sand castles my Uncle help us. My big cousins went back to the other side of the Island to see the stingrays again and me and my cousin Apii wanted to go but it was getting high tailed and really deep.
After my cousins came back my Uncle said “come on we are going back home now it is getting dark” so we pack up our stuff and


Wednesday, 15 October 2014

Holiday Highlight Writing


“ Yes can’t wait to go to Skate land.” I woke up and look outside my window and it was a sunny hot day, I was so excited to go. After I had my shower and change and my mum was waiting in the car.


When we finally got there me and my mum waited outside and I saw my friend Rose and I hugged her and gave her present , I got her pink Nike shoes and 50 dollars. I saw my other friends too like Ashley, Alla,Jessica,Liz and lots more they were all from my club netball team. When all of us went inside we all went to put the roller skates on. When me and Rose went
on we kept on falling down and my mum kept on falling too and we kept on laughing.


After skate land we were all were hungry so went to McDonald to eat.We had lots of food. I had a Big Mac it was yummy.After we finish our food we went to the park and then we went home, I had a lot of  fun at Skate-land,McDonald and the park.   



Tuesday, 23 September 2014

Michael and Danny

When Michael and Danny went to the park Danny was practicing his dance for the dance competition that was coming up.Well he was practicing his dance a girl saw him and she said “ can I touch your hair” and Danny said “ok” and  she touch it ,when she touched it her brother came and pushed Danny to the group and said to his sister “ what are you doing” and the sister said “ go away you are so mean gosh can’t you get leave me alone” and the brother said to Danny “ don’t you ever go to my sister if I see you one more time with my sister I will look for you and kill you” and Danny said “ ok ok I promise I will never go to your ever again.” STORY TO BE COUNTIED                                                                                                           

Creative writing

Once a upon a time there lived two girls their names were Louise and Grace.Louise and Grace were best friend ever since kindergarten. When they both turned five they both went to Pt England Primary School , Louise and Grace were both in class eight.One day a new girl came to class eight her name was June she looked very shy.Miss Thimbles asked Grace to look after June. When it was lunchtime,Louise,Grace’s old best friend saw June,Grace and other people playing tigge at the park  so Louise went up to June and said “can I play with you’s” and June said “ sorry you can’t play because we have too much people” and Louise went away angry and jealous.

When June and Grace were around fourteen years old they  went to the same College,i
t was called Sunny hills College Louise also went to the college,she would follow everywhere June or Graces goes even when they were in primary she
would follow them.

One day June said to Grace “ do you want to go watch the new movie Dark horse” and Grace said “ yep” and June said “ I will come pick you up at six” Grace said “ ok see you then” but as they were talking Louise was listening and when they went she started to laugh she said “ I’m going to get her tonight.” When June went to Grace’s house she walk to the front door and the door was open and June said “ what grace never leaves the door open.” She went inside and there was blood marks everywhere on the walls,table and chairs,then June went into Grace’s room and there was a letter there and inside the letter was a usb. June got the usb and put it into the computer and there was a folder and inside the folder was a video, she open the video and it was a video of Grace she was saying “ HELP ME JUNE HELP ME.” STORY TO BE CONTINUED   






Tuesday, 2 September 2014

Samoan Narrative

“ Yes can’t wait to go to Samoa.” When it was the school holidays Zack and sisters went to Samoa for a trip.They stayed in Apia which is the Capital of Samoa.One day Zacks older sister Ashley said “do you guys want to go to the beach” and they said “ yes yes please” so they packed a lunch for them and there swimming togs.They went to a beach called Vailua it was so beautiful.

Well Zacks sisters Ashley and Taunese were eating, Rowana, Zacks younger sister, was begging Ashley if she was allowed to go for a little swim and Ashley said “yes” so Rowana went to get change.She ran fast to the water.Rowana was get jumping around and swimming but then she swam too far and started to drown she was screaming so loud. Zac and Ashley swam as fast as they can to Rowana but as they were swimming to her, Rowana was screaming “SHARK SHARK SHARK!! ”and Ashley started to Scream. Zack kept on saying to Rowana to stay still but she kept on saying “ OH MY GOSH, OH MY GOSH!! HELP ME ZACK HELP ME!!!” and Zack said “come down I will help you just wait i’m coming.”

When Ashley went back to land she said “ hey where's Taunese” and Zack said “ I think she went for a walk”. Zack was getting closer and closer to Rowana and Zack said “ grab my hand quickly” and Rowana grab his hand but then the shark look like it was getting bigger and bigger but then it came out of the water but it was only Taunese and she “ HAHAHA you guys thought I was a shark” and Rowana said “ MAN I thought you were a shark gosh” and Asley said “ come on lets go home. The End…………………...  

Free blog writing

FOUR HOUR LATER.When they got off the plane Danny said “ finally we are here the was long as” and Danny mum said “ come on come on lets go inside.” When they went inside there was a man waiting for them he said “ hello and welcome to China” and Danny mum said “ thank you thank you very much” Danny said to the man what's your name and he said “ my name is Mubashshir but just call me Muba “ and Danny said “ Ok Muba.” Mubashshir took them to where they were going to stay. When they got home there was a boy standing and he said “ do you need help” and Danny said “ yes please.” after they took the bags inside Michael the boy said “ do you want to come to the park with me” and he said “ ok.” STORY TO BE COUNTED……………….