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Tuesday 23 September 2014

Creative writing

Once a upon a time there lived two girls their names were Louise and Grace.Louise and Grace were best friend ever since kindergarten. When they both turned five they both went to Pt England Primary School , Louise and Grace were both in class eight.One day a new girl came to class eight her name was June she looked very shy.Miss Thimbles asked Grace to look after June. When it was lunchtime,Louise,Grace’s old best friend saw June,Grace and other people playing tigge at the park  so Louise went up to June and said “can I play with you’s” and June said “ sorry you can’t play because we have too much people” and Louise went away angry and jealous.

When June and Grace were around fourteen years old they  went to the same College,i
t was called Sunny hills College Louise also went to the college,she would follow everywhere June or Graces goes even when they were in primary she
would follow them.

One day June said to Grace “ do you want to go watch the new movie Dark horse” and Grace said “ yep” and June said “ I will come pick you up at six” Grace said “ ok see you then” but as they were talking Louise was listening and when they went she started to laugh she said “ I’m going to get her tonight.” When June went to Grace’s house she walk to the front door and the door was open and June said “ what grace never leaves the door open.” She went inside and there was blood marks everywhere on the walls,table and chairs,then June went into Grace’s room and there was a letter there and inside the letter was a usb. June got the usb and put it into the computer and there was a folder and inside the folder was a video, she open the video and it was a video of Grace she was saying “ HELP ME JUNE HELP ME.” STORY TO BE CONTINUED   






1 comment:

  1. hi liz i am happy to your work its really showing to me that your doing a good work in class i'm very proud of you keep up the good work

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