On Saturday me,Taunese and Rowana went to our friend lucy’s party. When we got there the front gate was closed and we didn’t know how to open it so we were screaming out “ LUCY LUCY” and then she opened the gate and said “ Hi come in.” Her house was cool and big. While we were eating some more people came Lucy opened the and it was Jordan and Sella the twins.
After we finish eating Lucy said “ Do you want to go for a swim” and we said “ ok.” So we got change into our swimming togs and went for a swim. After our swim we went to the trampoline and Lucy sister turned on the sprinklers under the trampoline and we were jumping up and down. The water was coming through the trampoline. It was fun.
When we got change we played fluffy bunny Lucy won it was hard. I lost sight away. Then we had a singing competition I was just watching the winner was Jordan. When the party finished my mum came to get me from Lucys house. I really enjoyed it at Lucy house.
Hi Liz,
ReplyDeleteWas that a really fun day for you it must be because the first paragraph does not make sense but great job writing some paragraphs, Keep up the great work.