Michael and Danny

When Michael and Danny went to the park Danny was practicing his dance for the dance competition that was coming up.Well he was practicing his dance a girl saw him and she said “ can I touch your hair” and Danny said “ok” and  she touch it ,when she touched it her brother came and pushed Danny to the group and said to his sister “ what are you doing” and the sister said “ go away you are so mean gosh can’t you get leave me alone” and the brother said to Danny “ don’t you ever go to my sister if I see you one more time with my sister I will look for you and kill you” and Danny said “ ok ok I promise I will never go to your ever again.” STORY TO BE COUNTIED                                                                                                           

Creative writing

Once a upon a time there lived two girls their names were Louise and Grace.Louise and Grace were best friend ever since kindergarten. When they both turned five they both went to Pt England Primary School , Louise and Grace were both in class eight.One day a new girl came to class eight her name was June she looked very shy.Miss Thimbles asked Grace to look after June. When it was lunchtime,Louise,Grace’s old best friend saw June,Grace and other people playing tigge at the park  so Louise went up to June and said “can I play with you’s” and June said “ sorry you can’t play because we have too much people” and Louise went away angry and jealous.

When June and Grace were around fourteen years old they  went to the same College,it was called Sunny hills College Louise also went to the college,she would follow everywhere June or Graces goes even when they were in primary she

would follow them.

One day June said to Grace “ do you want to go watch the new movie Dark horse” and Grace said “ yep” and June said “ I will come pick you up at six” Grace said “ ok see you then” but as they were talking Louise was listening and when they went she started to laugh she said “ I’m going to get her tonight.” When June went to Grace’s house she walk to the front door and the door was open and June said “ what grace never leaves the door open.” She went inside and there was blood marks everywhere on the walls,table and chairs,then June went into Grace’s room and there was a letter there and inside the letter was a usb. June got the usb and put it into the computer and there was a folder and inside the folder was a video, she open the video and it was a video of Grace she was saying “ HELP ME JUNE HELP ME.” STORY TO BE CONTINUED   

Samoan Narrative

“ Yes can’t wait to go to Samoa.” When it was the school holidays Zack and sisters went to Samoa for a trip.They stayed in Apia which is the Capital of Samoa.One day Zacks older sister Ashley said “do you guys want to go to the beach” and they said “ yes yes please” so they packed a lunch for them and there swimming togs.They went to a beach called Vailua it was so beautiful.

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FOUR HOUR LATER.When they got off the plane Danny said “ finally we are here the was long as” and Danny mum said “ come on come on lets go inside.” When they went inside there was a man waiting for them he said “ hello and welcome to China” and Danny mum said “ thank you thank you very much” Danny said to the man what's your name and he said “ my name is Mubashshir but just call me Muba “ and Danny said “ Ok Muba.” Mubashshir took them to where they were going to stay. When they got home there was a boy standing and he said “ do you need help” and Danny said “ yes please.” after they took the bags inside Michael the boy said “ do you want to come to the park with me” and he said “ ok.” STORY TO BE COUNTED……………….