Friday, 2 August 2013
Holly and the frog
This story is about a girl her name was Holly her mother read a book and it was called princess and the frog prince.The next day Holly was so bored so she decided to go outside. When she went outside she saw a big green frog in her sandpit she tried to get the frog out of her sandpit.Holly was hitting the sandpit with a sick then Holly sat at the edge of the sandpit and she kissed the frog and the hideous prince that she have ever seen he had no teeth and smelt just like dirty socks and one of his eye looked solemnly at Holly.She kissed the hideous prince again and it turned back into a big fat green frog again.
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Good effort at retelling Liz. You are trying really hard to use new words but you have a few mistakes. Remember to get a friend to check it and let me know when to check it before you post ok. Otherwise keep it up!
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